Sidewalked.
May 15, 2007
Rustic brown shoelaces;
mud-covered
from the years of unpaid labor.
Layers of sediment
caking the worn soles,
which cover the
warm, splintered feet
of a fourteen year old girl.
Cigarette-yellow toenails;
pedicured by
“services rendered.”
Leading up to
stallion strong legs.
Muscular
from the years
of marching for non-political
reasons.
Sand dusted knees;
layered
with a fine powder
from the time spent crying,
Pleading to god.
Hoping for some sort of
escape,
chariot.
Hoping for her knight
in shining armor,
carrying that twenty.
Callous covered hands;
massaged by
a creamy white lotion.
Once delicate, now
etched from
years of servitude.
Or solitude.
Chocolate brown hair
dangling from
her head,
waving as if for one
last time.
A desperate hope sinking
back into her pores.
Retreating back
into her mind.
Vibrant blue eyes
tantalizing every sense,
Eyes deep as nature,
shallow as the sidewalk
that she’s trapped on.
love the way the vivid imagery delivers the powerful message. i like the use of metaphors and irony, especially in the ending. beautiful write.
I’ve taken the liberty of linking your blog to mind. it was hard to find your site since you didn’t leave a link. you might want to put it on your profile page :) welcome to the blogging world. keep writing. i’ll definitely be back to read more of the wonderful pieces here.
Somehow i missed the point. Probably lost in translation :) Anyway … nice blog to visit.
cheers, Moustache.